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Max Lavergne's avatar

Wonderful!

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Mark Leidner's avatar

Your comment is deeply appreciated and enormously treasured, Max.

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Jeffrey Streeter's avatar

Full of compelling phrases. I especially enjoyed "the outer boroughs of sense."

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Mark Leidner's avatar

Thank you, Jeffrey

"outer boroughs of sense" took longer to write / arrive at than anything in the actual poem FWIW

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Jeffrey Streeter's avatar

It was worth the effort, I'd say.

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